T1+Persuade

__Monday 21 March__
L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__Tuesday 22 March__
30 18 Avenue TIS Tauranga

Dear Mr Diver

I know that we all loved the extended morning tea last Friday. I think it was a great idea and that you should keep doing it. If you continued to do this everyone would always get back to class quickly , the teachers would have longer for a cup of tea and chatting with other teachers, the extra fresh air would help students think and concentrate.  Wouldn’t it be great if all this stuff happened? (Mrs Stock - NS Identify position clearly, establish points to discuss and use a rhetorical question.  If the morning tea did keep on going the kids will know that to get the morning tea they will need to get to the class quickly and nicely. There fore doing that every day if there was a extended morning tea as a reword at the end of every week.

If the extended morning tea continued will get more time to eat and play and so will the teachers. The kids will like the morning tea because, they will have more time to hand in notics or do eny other jobs they need to do at morning tea.

I know that by giving the kids an extended morning tea it will help us learn better because we would of had more to eat and time to refresh our brains so we will learn and be more focused. From Victoria



=== __Tuesday 29 March 2011 __ ===  <span style="font: normal normal normal 18px/normal Papyrus; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">__End Nuclear Power Now__

<span style="font: normal normal normal 11px/normal 'Al Bayan'; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">I believe that we should not have Nuclear Power because there has all ready bean one deserter with Nuclear Power in the world and thats all ready crossed enough trouble for Japan, would you like that to happen to New zealand or any other country if we get Nuclear Power. Nuclear power costs heaps to set up and has lots of bad waste.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 11px/normal 'Al Bayan'; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">I know Nuclear Power is cheap but if you wan’t to save power try tuning off your lights every once and a while or tun off the t.v. See its not hard to save power costs also having Nuclear Power in your home can actually do your family and others wooers than just getting a silly little power bill in the mail, and for those who have not notes Nuclear Power can actually cost 12 to 18 billion $ just to billed one power plant. Now think would you rather put your family at risk or would rather get a silly power bill in your letter box just because you left your lights on in the night.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 11px/normal 'Al Bayan'; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">Travel back your sitting on your sofa watching the news oh no there has been a earth quake in Japan oh no it has set of a title wave and now look a Nuclear Power out burst now travel ford a year or two and every other country in the world has Nuclear Power and more deserters are happening. Imagine if this actually happened, and people all over the world are dying or getting very sick. Deserters with Nuclear Power are not predictable that is why the only way to stop this happening is to stop Nuclear Power its self. Think do you wan’t to end up like Japan.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 11px/normal 'Al Bayan'; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">Now for all of those farmers or any one who cears about the environment even if you don’t I would be great full if you listen to this. Nuclear Power has some of the most bad wast in the world, this could do harm to your life stock, oscines, rivers and if the seas die then some of the most beautiful and rare creatures will die with it, and people like me who love animals so much will never live the same again if they all go and do you know why because of Nuclear Power, Think smarter NZ.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 11px/normal 'Al Bayan'; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">From Victoria RM 41