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__The Black Horse__

One sumer in the very hart of Nevada, a boy called James who is 12 years old and his father called John who live on a horse ranch with three other men Mark, Lewis and Kane, where they catch, train and sell wild horses. James whose father owns the ranch is all ways wanted his own horse hess been loving them for as long as he can remember one day hoping to get his own one that he can train him self one that is wild. The only problem his dad wan’t let him because he fell off a horse when he was James’s age so he is going to wait until James is a year or two older before he gets to ride.

A hot day past and Mark, Lewis and Kane had just been riding their horses catching wild mustangs early in the morning. James who was still in bead suddenly woke up from a cold and windy night to look out the window and see a herd of about Twenty ode horses nineteen mears and one stallion, James found his dream horse, a beautiful mear with a coat like the most blackest sand you can get and just one wight foot wither than snow.

he rushed out side to get a better look at her, but when he got to the wooden pen the only horses he saw were grays and chestnuts his dream horse has got to be in there some where. Then as if by magic there she was that lovely horse she walked right up to me and James was just about to try and touch this wonderful creature when his dad came and slapped his hand growling ‘‘ don’t you dear try and touch that horse she’s for my work.” James didn’t say anything he just walked away in silence, he whispered to him self “ I’ll find a way to be with you again I promise.”

That afternoon James was in his room thinking of the black horse, he new that he wasn’t aloud to go near the horse but his father didn’t say anything about having your own little world about you owning the horse in your mind James also knows that every horse must have a name. “ Now my horse is a beautiful dark black like a shade thats it I will name my horse Shade thats a cool name for her.” whispered James.

An hour past and it was dinner time, roast pork they were having, James finished his diner first he cautiously asked his father if he can feed an apple to the black horse he didn’t say the horses name because he did not want to get in trouble. His dad said yes “ but don’t get attached to the horse.” He got a big red juice apple walked over to the pen and dropped the apple inside, James took a sep back so Shade doesn’t get spooked she slowly walked up and ate the apple then rushed back into the far corner of the paddock and didn’t came back out for the rest of the night.

The next morning when James looked out the window in his room he saw that Shade was not there all he saw was a part of the fence was shattered to the ground. He raced outside to find his dad standing next to the fence. “ dad dad Shade is gone” shouted James “ Shade you named it I told you that you can’t get attached to the horse but we will worry about that later right now get two other horses from the shed and we will go and find her.

Now they have been ridding for an hour they finally found her and just as Jhon was about to through a lasso around her James jumped in frunt of his dad and stopped him “ Look here dad you let this horse go why do you think she got out because she want’s to be with her own kind in the wild away from us LET HER GO pleas” ordered James, and just like that Jone that if this mens so much to James and that it was an ordered him to do it he and James gently said “ go home Shade go to your family” “ I love you Shade”. cried James Then in a blink of an eye the black horse had galloped away and was never sean again.

By Victoria Goodwin Rm 41

__Tuesday 28 June 2011__

__The Black Horse__

One sumer in the very hart of Nevada, a boy called James who is 12 years old and his father called Jone who live on a horse ranch with three other men Mark, Lewis and Kane, where they catch, train and sell wild horses. James whose father owns the ranch is all ways wanted his own horse hess bean loving them for as long as he can remember one day hoping to get his own one can train him self own that is wild. The only problem his dad wan’t let him because he fell off a horse when he was James’s age so he going to wate until James is a year or two older before he gets to ride.

A hot day past and Mark, Lewis and Kane had just been riding their horses catching wild mustangs early in the morning. James who was still in bead suddenly woke up from a cold and windy night to look out the window and see a herd of about Twenty ode horses nineteen mears and one stallion, and just like that James found his dream horse a beautiful mear with a coat like the most blackest sand you can get and just one wight foot wither than snow.

he rushed out side to get a better look at her, but when he got to the wooden pen the only horses he saw were grays and chestnuts his dream horse has got to be in there some where. Then as if by magic there she was that lovely horse she walked right up to me and James was just about to try and touch this wonderful creature when his dad came and slapped his hand growling ‘‘ don’t you dear try and touch that horse she’s for my work.” James didn’t say anything he just walked away in silence, he whispered to him self “ I’ll find a way to be with you again I promise.”

That afternoon James was in his room thinking of the black horse, he new that he wasn’t aloud to go near the horse but his father didn’t say anything about having your own little world about you owning the horse in your mind James also knows that every horse must have a name. “ Now my horse is a beautiful dark black like a sadow thats it I will name my horse Shade thats a cool name for her.” whispered James.

An hour past and it was diner time roast pork they were having, James finished his diner first he cautiously asked his father if he can feed an apple to the black horse he didn’t say the horses name because he did not want to get in trouble. His dad said yes “ but don’t get attached to the horse.” He got a big red juice apple walked over to the pen and dropped the apple inside, James took a sep back so Shade doesn’t get spooked she slowly walked up and ate the apple then rushed back into the far corner of the paddock and didn’t came back out for the rest of the night.

The next morning when James looked out the window in his room he saw that Shade was not there all he saw was a part of the fence was shattered to the ground. He raced outside to find his dad standing next to the fence. “ dad dad Shade is gone” shouted James “ Shade you named it I told you that you can’t get attached to the horse but we will worry about that later right now get two other horses from the shed and we will go and find her.

Now have been ridding for an houer they finally found her and just as Jone was about to through a lasso around her James jumped in frunt of his dad and stopped him “ Look here dad you let this horse go why do you think she got out because she want’s to be with her own kind in the wild away from us LET HER GO pleas” ordered James, and just like that Jone that if this mens so much to James and that it was an ordered him to do it he and James gently said “ go home Shade go to your family” “ I love you Shade”. cried James Then in a blink of an eye the black horse had galloped away and was never sean again.

By Victoria Goodwin Rm 41



__Thursday 23 June 2011__

__A Wolf for a Dog__

One day in the cold south of Canada, a boy called Ben and his father Mat went hunting at 6:00 in the cold morning. Once they were both warm and ready they tramped out into the dense bush. A couple mints later and they haven't caught a thing, Mat hers a soft and gentle wolf howl up ahead he can’t see the wolf but he takes a shot and the howl slowly gets quieter and then it stops and Mat rushes off to find the cold and bloodless wolf.

Once Mat had collected the wolf, he felt proud of him self and happily walked home with Ben. When they started put the wolf down on the table, they realized that it was a female and that it could have pups somewhere. Mat is too hungry and could to even care let - lone go back into the bush, but Ben does love animals and quickly hurries off back out into the bush to see if there is any pups. Straight away Ben stumbles across a den where a wight pup lies cold and all alone, he new that this pups mother was the one that Ben’s father killed so he immediately cearfully scooped the pup up and took it home to love and cear for until it is old enough to be set free.

Meanwhile the wolf pup is being kept in a fenced off little part of their back yard with shelter, water and Ben feeds him chicken each day. Growing quickly the wolf pup is now seven months old. Caring for the wolf everyday Ben feels love and affection for the fluffy wolf thinking of him as a pet rather than a wild animal. Looking at his snow coloured coat, Ben kindly names the wolf Blizzard. Wolves, like dogs also need exercise to so Ben takes Blizzard for a walk, so he grabs an old dog lead that was from his old dog he had two years ago clipped it to a old dog collar and buckled it up to Blizzard and walked down the road into town. Once they got into town people started looking at Ben probably thinking why he has a wolf and not some sort of Hunterway, but Ben didn’t care he just turned around and walked on back to his house. On the way home Ben and Blizzard had to stop for some little kids who wanted to pat the dog, but Ben didn’t tell the kids that Blizzard was a wolf because he didn’t want to scare them. Sooner or later the kids left, Ben and Blizzard made it home, and Blizzard was put back in his pen while Ben went inside to have lunch and Blizzard was given his chicken.

A month went by and Blizzard was eight months old now and is getting to big for his little pen, so Ben and his father billet Blizzard a new and much bigger pen, one that goes into the snow and around a cupel of trees so he can get the fell of being on his own once they set him free. A day went by and Ben went outside to get the mail, he looked at all of the envelops to see if any were for him, he found one it was a post cared from his big brother Jake who was at collage saying that Ben and Mat can go and stay with him for the weekend. Ben rushes inside to tell his dad, Mat says yes but Jake’s collage is all the way on the other side of town it will be to far away from Blizzard and pets aren't allowed.

Thinking Blizzard will be fine on his own they go ahead with the plan to see Jake, so Ben makes sure that Blizzard’s collar is nice and tight so he can’t get loose. Ben and Mat say they’re good boys and they head off, Blizzard is left alone and he is not happy. On the way to see Jake Ben is getting worried about Blizzard being on his own, but he just stops thinking about it and he carries on. Back at home things were much worse, Ben forgot to feed Blizzard before he left and Blizzard is not in his pen, he is actually roaming through people’s farms chasing and killing all of their chickens and all of the hunters in the neighbourhood are trying to shoot him. By now Ben and Mat have made it to Jake’s collage, then the phone rings it was Ben’s next door neighbour saying “Your wolf is running through our farms eating all of our hens”, so worried about Blizzard and that he could get hurt he makes Mat drive him back to the other side of town to save Blizzard and set him free so no one can get him again.

Ben makes it back, and he quickly catches up to Blizzard just in time to grab him out of a hen house, he ignored every one yelling at him and how he should keep Blizzard under control. Finally Ben and Blizzard got home. Ben was happy that he saved Blizzard but he was also sad because now he had to let his best friend go, so he loosened his collar off Blizzard, said his goodbeys and pushed his friend away. All Ben got back from Blizzard was a single howl from the distance.

THE END

__Thursday 23 June 2011__

**Comment: Victoria I love reading your stories, you always write about animals :+) You and dad have done a good job of editing some of this together.**

**Next Steps: Try and show the reader the event e.g.** **'The wolf pup is seven months old now and Ben is starting to get attached to the wolf so he gives it a name. Ben thinks of wolfs as beaning could and snow like so he names the wolf Blizzard'.**

**Growing quickly the wolf pup is now 7 months old. Caring for the wolf everyday Ben feels love and affection for the fluffy wolf thinking of him as a pet rather than a wild animal. Looking at his snow coloured coat, Ben kindly names the wolf Blizzard.**

**More sentences like the one in red**

__A Wolf for a Dog__

One day in the cold south of Canada, a boy called Ben and his father Mat went hunting at 6:00am in the cold morning. Once they were both ready they tramped out into the bush. A couple mints later and they haven't caught a thing Mat hers a wolf howl ahead he can’t see the wolf but he takes a shot, the howl slowly stops Mat rushes of to find the wolf.

Once Mat had collected the wolf, him and Ben went back to the house with their prize. When they started put the wolf down on the table they realized that it was female and that it could have pups somewhere. Mat is too hungry to even care, but Ben hurries back out into the woods to see if there is any pups. Straight away Ben stumbles across a den where a pup lies cold and all alone, he new that this pups mother was the one that Ben’s father killed and he immediately scooped the pup up and took it home to look after until it is old enough to be set free.

Meanwhile the wolf pup is being kept in a fenced off little part of their back yard with shelter, water and Ben feeds him chicken each day. The wolf pup is seven months old now and Ben is starting to get attached to the wolf so he gives it a name. Ben thinks of wolfs as beaning could and snow like so he names the wolf Blizzard. Wolves, like dogs also need exercise to so Ben takes Blizzard for a walk, so he grabs an old dog lead that was from his old dog he had two years ago clipped it to a old dog collar and buckled it up to Blizzard and walked down the road into town. Once they got into town people started looking at Ben probably thinking why he has a wolf and not some sort of Hunterway, but Ben didn’t care he just turned around and walked on back to his house. On the way home Ben and Blizzard had to stop for some little kids who wanted to pat the dog, but Ben didn’t tell the kids that Blizzard was a wolf because he didn’t want to scare them. Sooner or later the kids left, Ben and Blizzard made it home, and Blizzard was put back in his pen while Ben went inside to have lunch and Blizzard was given his chicken.

A month went by and Blizzard was eight months old now and is getting to big for his little pen, so Ben and his father billet Blizzard a new and much bigger pen, one that goes into the snow and around a cupel of trees so he can get the fell of being on his own once they set him free. A day went by and Ben went outside to get the mail, he looked at all of the envelops to see if any were for him, he found one it was a post cared from his big brother Jake who was at collage saying that Ben and Mat can go and stay with him for the weekend. Ben rushes inside to tell his dad, Mat says yes but Jake’s collage is all the way on the other side of town it will be to far away from Blizzard and pets aren't allowed.

Thinking Blizzard will be fine on his own they go ahead with the plan to see Jake, so Ben makes sure that Blizzard’s collar is nice and tight so he can’t get loose. Ben and Mat say they’re good boys and they head off, Blizzard is left alone and he is not happy. On the way to see Jake Ben is getting worried about Blizzard being on his own, but he just stops thinking about it and he carries on. Back at home things were much worse, Ben forgot to feed Blizzard before he left and Blizzard is not in his pen, he is actually roaming through people’s farms chasing and killing all of their chickens and all of the hunters in the neighbourhood are trying to shoot him. By now Ben and Mat have made it to Jake’s collage, then the phone rings it was Ben’s next door neighbour saying “Your wolf is running through our farms eating all of our hens”, so worried about Blizzard and that he could get hurt he makes Mat drive him back to the other side of town to save Blizzard and set him free so no one can get him again.

Ben makes it back, and he quickly catches up to Blizzard just in time to grab him out of a hen house, he ignored every one yelling at him and how he should keep Blizzard under control. Finally Ben and Blizzard got home. Ben was happy that he saved Blizzard but he was also sad because now he had to let his best friend go, so he loosened his collar off Blizzard, said his goodbeys and pushed his friend away. All Ben got back from Blizzard was a single howl from the distance.

THE END

From Victoria Goodwin RM 41

__Wednesday 22 June 2011__

__A Wolf for a Dog__

One day in the cold south of Canada, a boy called Ben and his father Mat went hunting at 6:00 in the cold morning. Once they were both ready they tramped out into the bush. A couple mints later and they haven't caught a thing Mat hers a wolf howl ahead he can’t see the wolf but he takes a shot, the howl slowly stops Mat rushes of to find the wolf.

Once Mat had collected the wolf, him and Ben went back to the house with their prize. When they started put the wolf down on the table they realized that it was female and that it could have pups somewhere. Mat is too hungry to even care, but Ben hurries back out into the woods to see if there is any pups. Straight away Ben stumbles across a den where a pup lies cold and all alone, he new that this pups mother was the one that Ben’s father killed and he immediately scooped the pup up and took it home to look after until it is old enough to be set free.

Meanwhile the wolf pup is being kept in a fenced off little part of their back yard with shelter, water and Ben feeds him chicken each day. The wolf pup is seven months old now and Ben is starting to get attached to the wolf so he gives it a name. Ben thinks of wolfs as beaning could and snow like so he names the wolf Blizzard. Wolves, like dogs also need exercise to so Ben takes Blizzard for a walk, so he grabs an old dog lead that was from his old dog he had two years ago clipped it to a old dog collar and buckled it up to Blizzard and walked down the road into town. Once they got into town people started looking at Ben probably thinking why he has a wolf and not some sort of Hunterway, but Ben didn’t care he just turned around and walked on back to his house. On the way home Ben and Blizzard had to stop for some little kids who wanted to pat the dog, but Ben didn’t tell the kids that Blizzard was a wolf because he didn’t want to scare them. Sooner or later the kids left, Ben and Blizzard made it home, and Blizzard was put back in his pen while Ben went inside to have lunch and Blizzard was given his chicken.

A month went by and Blizzard was eight months old now and is getting to big for his little pen, so Ben and his father billet Blizzard a new and much bigger pen, one that goes into the snow and around a cupel of trees so he can get the fell of being on his own once they set him free. A day went by and Ben went outside to get the mail, he looked at all of the envelops to see if any were for him, he found one it was a post cared from his big brother Jake who was at collage saying that Ben and Mat can go and stay with him for the weekend. Ben rushes inside to tell his dad, Mat says yes but Jake’s collage is all the way on the other side of town it will be to far away from Blizzard and pets aren't allowed.

Thinking Blizzard will be fine on his own they go ahead with the plan to see Jake, so Ben makes sure that Blizzard’s collar is nice and tight so he can’t get loose. Ben and Mat say they’re good boys and they head off, Blizzard is left alone and he is not happy. On the way to see Jake Ben is getting worried about Blizzard being on his own, but he just stops thinking about it and he carries on. Back at home things were much worse, Ben forgot to feed Blizzard before he left and Blizzard is not in his pen, he is actually roaming through people’s farms chasing and killing all of their chickens and all of the hunters in the neighbourhood are trying to shoot him. By now Ben and Mat have made it to Jake’s collage, then the phone rings it was Ben’s next door neighbour saying “Your wolf is running through our farms eating all of our hens”, so worried about Blizzard and that he could get hurt he makes Mat drive him back to the other side of town to save Blizzard and set him free so no one can get him again.

Ben makes it back, and he quickly catches up to Blizzard just in time to grab him out of a hen house, he ignored every one yelling at him and how he should keep Blizzard under control. Finally Ben and Blizzard got home. Ben was happy that he saved Blizzard but he was also sad because now he had to let his best friend go, so he loosened his collar off Blizzard, said his goodbeys and pushed his friend away. All Ben got back from Blizzard was a single howl from the distance.

THE END

From Victoria Goodwin RM 41

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__Friday 10 June 2011__

Love Love is normally only sean when needed. She lives in a house where it is peace and quirt and listens to people who are lonely and need someone in their lives. Her eyes are like the reddest and most brights sky you could ever get at night, and her pulps are like little harts all clumped together. Her job is to make that special boy and girl in love, she mostly succeeds but sometimes doesn’t but she does not cear she just lets them do what they wont to do. She is never sad or alone because she knows that Happiness isn’t far away. Love loves